Internal field study · not client work
Local-shop audit desk
A private review surface for finding a current website problem, preserving the source, and writing a specific first note for human approval.
The working artifact
The evidence is inspectable.
This is the actual internal outreach preflight—not a browser mockup or a client result. It records public signals and clearly labels the ten businesses as potential customers, not interested buyers.
The problem
A generic pitch is easy to ignore.
The desk makes the first conversation about one owner-checkable problem on the current public page. Each record keeps the observation date, official source, caution, and an unsent draft in one place.
- Independent ownership and the official business site are checked before a shop enters the list.
- Observed facts are separated from inferences.
- Drafts use the public business channel and stay below 90 words.
- Every defect must be checked again immediately before outreach.
No invented result: this system has produced a reviewed outreach preflight. It has not yet produced a paying client, so the page does not claim one.
What the system keeps separate
Evidence, proposal, and approval.
- Observed
- The current public page, source URL, timestamp, and exact defect.
- Proposed
- A bounded repair and a short, unsent note for a human to review.
- Approved
- Only owner-confirmed facts and media are eligible for a public build.
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